I love word combinations. One of the great things about combinations is that they reveal the near-infinite complexity, the wide range of nuances, hiding within the individual words. Take blindly. It most often has a figurative sense of doing things mindlessly, without thinking, understanding or judgment. You might follow others or fall for a person blindly, etc. But it also has a direct, literal sense of not physically seeing things around you. To help pull out those subtleties I sometimes randomly generate pairings, in this case verbs with the adverb blindly.
One verb that came up was creep and it birthed this fragment:
“We creep blindly through the engulfing darkness of the tunnel, not daring even a whisper, communicating only with subtle shifts in the pressure of fingers encircling the ankle of the one in front, slight angling of that bony joint in response. The heat is punishing, pressing on us, seeming to constrict our narrow passage even more. The sweat has long since drenched our clothing, making it adhere to the clay as we inch along crablike. How long have we been moving? I realize I have no idea. The unrelenting darkness has shut down not just vision but also the connections to most other gauges of experience. The only heightened sense is hearing as we listen for the slightest of shufflings from behind that would signal pursuit. How long until we reach the end, hopefully undiscovered so that we may rise and sprint to speed our escape? …”
I don’t know yet who might be pursuing them, where they might be headed or if they escape, but the combination “creep blindly” set a whole train of thought in motion, different than other random combinations that came up, such as inject blindly, stab blindly, rule blindly, prepare blindly, honor blindly and so on.
I’ll say more about the program I use in a different post, but this one is already getting too long.
Cheers
Copyright © Thomas Ward 2017
A very small word to describe ur above post “superbly imagined and felt”
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Your comment made me smile. Thank you
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Wow that’s great coz i made u smile.
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You do realize that’s such a creepy thing to do😉!
The great escape held awesome suspense. Fun read.
I also pull up searches if the word itself does not trigger a response once in a while.
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Lol. Nice. I just blindly followed where the words took me 🙂
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And to think I blindly followed alone on your writing. But now I see what you are trying to say. Very thought provoking Thomas.
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Thank you so much. It is amazing where our words can take us.
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Definitely out of he dark!
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I was sure drawn into your story… you should write more of this escape! Very suspenseful!
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Thanks so much. I’ve been pondering how unravel might continue the story but haven’t figured that out yet.
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